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Post by J13 AKA LYRICAL CHAOS on Oct 22, 2005 16:30:13 GMT -5
iight this is the frist batle on here prollyu not gonna b votes but yo if u no ane1 bring them here peace u spit first
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Post by doememba on Oct 23, 2005 17:11:56 GMT -5
how can u concentrate and diss me, when ur "growing pains" hur-ting/
battlin me? for real J? dawg you only thir-teen/
i shud put you to bed rather than rip u lyrically/
i would shoot me in the head before i take u seriously/
let me show you how to do this thing/
this is daniel and goliath, but u dont got a sling/
for real, your site is the weakest i ever been to/
im the law, ne thing u say can and will be used against you/
you say ur an MC, dawg u just a pretender/
you got your on site? pff u the only member/
J13 i will crush your dreams/
slash your spleen/
straight up bash your team/
only thing u lack is multis,structure punches and vocabulary/
spit back, bring ur crew, or are they imaginary?/
finished done, i will "lid" this issue/
uve been ripped, someone get this "kid" a tissue/
no beef man jus a spit i aint rlly tryna put u down
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Post by J13 AKA LYRICAL CHAOS on Oct 25, 2005 8:40:30 GMT -5
u talk about how ya shit gonna devour the power?
whatch as ur lil flower of hope get crushed by the twin towers
afta this u will b lonley wonderin where the dayz went
wonderin where ur payments, i rap my fulliest extent
wen u get beat by a 13 year old i ma sen u into insanity
my lyrical bullets will come again killin u and ya whole familly
bitch wat u in this rap industry, using the same old vocabulary
well guess wat i m 13 years old welcome 2 the new century
cuz wen u spit ur raps and words get all blury
so wen u come out wit ya reacord it is lik u jakin off nun happenin
wen people hear u rappin there only gonna b booin laughin
my raps beat u not the way ur daddy used 2
so who u say ur gonna shool threw go on brin ya crew i aint scared of u!
iight cool niiice spit man and shit this one is not one of my best but ye ok niice man stay sctive i ma get some people on iight?
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Post by doememba on Oct 26, 2005 0:57:38 GMT -5
sure amn ill keep checkin in get it crackin...p.s. ur guna be nuts when ur older work on punches and multis...i know my verse was like i shudnt be givin advice but it was kinda freestyle lol...ur guna be nuts tho stay up homie...
one
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Post by J13 AKA LYRICAL CHAOS on Oct 26, 2005 14:09:21 GMT -5
thanx man but just 2 let u no that was shit( my verse) lol but yo if u have a change chek out my new song iight thanx man and niice freestyle
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.:platinum:.
New Member
'fuk wid mi life familiar...i will kill ya'
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Post by .:platinum:. on Nov 8, 2005 13:16:02 GMT -5
opener: tie....gd opener on both sidez.....EZ
punchez: D...pounded dem out...not sayin... J came soft....
personalz: tie...earli on in site...soo not expectin much....
creativity: tie...gd on both sidez...imaginative
flow:J....it woz a lot less staggered......
closer:D...killed dis nigga...lol.....
vote: goez 2 Doememba......nize roll.....
[but didnt u mean DAVID...lol]
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Post by J13 AKA LYRICAL CHAOS on Nov 8, 2005 14:16:00 GMT -5
lol ok thanx man 4 votin pz
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